To be honest, the introduction to any story is the hardest to right, especially when things seem to lack direction or plot for the reader to follow. Yet, I persevere on, and hope to keep your interest.
Our MC begins his adventure in training, where the tensions between social classes and war weariness can be seen. Here's what I have now:
http://www.mediafire.com/?7krq4s6yh40dm3q
Enjoy! Though 2 pages may not seem like much, it's rather tiring. Once the story picks up, things will get easier for both of us.
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